jueves, 9 de junio de 2016

An opinion essay

We are taking better care of our planet. Do you agree?

Nowadays people don't take care of our planet. As you can see our big problem is money. Humans do not think for others, all of us or a big part of us acts for himself. And when humans want to be rich and have a lot of money appears another problems like consumerism, wars, corruption, etc. This things are destroying our planet.

In first place wars are a big problem what we have to solve becouse wars make people kill other people, die and fight. I thing religion is the first thing that causes wars. On the other hand, we are a consumerist society, we buy things that we don't need, the causes of consumerism are the new tecnologies and fashion. Also big part of these products pollute.

In second place the politicians are corrups, and that produces corruption, another big problem of our society. They take away our money.

Finally I want to say that if we don't solve this big problems, the world will become a bad place for live.

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